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Examples
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The IB Diploma Internal Assessment is the single most
important work the history student does whether at Standard or
Higher Level. Perhaps the greatest challenge with the IA is
knowing where to start. The following examples constitute a
selection of some of the best examples by my former students at the
International School of Toulouse and the British International
School of Bratislava and are presented as a source of
inspiration for those looking for an idea. The 'starred'
examples *, have been chosen to illustrate particularly
interesting approaches, original ideas or my personal favourites;
although not the only examples of Level 7 work in this
collection, most of these were awarded full marks, or close to
full marks by the examiners. If you have
produced a Level 7 Internal Assessment and would like to share
it here, send me an email at this
address. The following examples were
produced for the History IA 2003-2016. From first exam May 2017
a new format is in place, (History IA from 2017) which although
similar in style, does include some important changes. |
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Uday Rai Mehra
Did the USSR Place Missiles in Cuba to Protect Her Existence as
a Socialist Nation? |
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Cuba – the only socialist nation in the Americas
– faced a threat from the USA – the USSR’s greatest rival –
following the Bay of Pigs invasion and the USSR as the vanguard
of communism, needed to uphold their “obligation to...protect
Cuba” (Khrushchev). The challenges facing Khrushchev’s regime,
both from within the Soviet Union and from China and the USA,
posed a threat to his image as a strong leader. |
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Torge Mecker
West Berliners during the Berlin Airlift
An important role? |
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Roberta Kovacs *
The problem of transnational history textbooks
Hungary-Slovakia and the Treaty of Trianon |
Having lived in West Berlin during the Airlift,
my grandparents told me a lot about it since I was a small
child, increasing my interest in the topic. In most books the
emphasis is more on the superpowers, USA and USSR, the airlift
pilots and the significant individuals, like Ernst Reuter and
General Lucius D. Clay. But people tend to forget that the
ordinary Berliners also played an important role. |
The Treaty of Trianon, signed in 1920, was the
peace Treaty that dealt with Hungary at the end of World War I..
Hungary was to lose more than two thirds of its inhabitants and
territory to neighbouring countries such as
Czechoslovakia.. This investigation assesses why there are
difficulties in producing transnational history textbooks using
Slovak-Hungarian controversies surrounding the Treaty of Trianon
as an example. |
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Stephanie Radoja
National Service in 1950s Britain
A positive experience |
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Viliam Mojto
The fall of the Berlin Wall
The strengths and weaknesses of oral history |
Everyone was issued with supplies; beret, shirts,
kit bag, etc. and spent 2 weeks “parading, learning your left
foot from your right, how to clean your shoes and make your bed”
. They were all given the standard army haircut and issued with
a National Service Number.Most of these men had never been away
from home and suffered from homesickness: “It felt odd … at
first … I seemed to be awake a considerable time, trying to come
to terms with the unknown world that lay ahead. |
As said by Timothy Garton Ash, ‘The disadvantages
of the witness against the historian are those of partiality in
space, time and judgment.’ This is, I believe the case of my
oral history source as well. The witness recalls what followed
just immediately after people have managed to cross from one
side to another and describes the atmosphere at that moment as
well as reactions of the people. Yet we are not provided with
anything that preceded this event or that followed this event
because the narrator is in limited time span. |
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Clare Roberts *
“The Great Fire of Smyrna” (Izmir 1922)
Heritage and controversy |
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Viktoria Meszaros *
Nicholas Winton- The Power of Good
The film director as historian |
The events of Smyrna in 1922 are surrounded by a
cloud of disagreement and national pride. As Reşat Kasaba writes
in Izmir 1922: A Port City Unravels, it “serves no historical
purpose to impute guilt or ascribe indiscriminate victimhood for
an entire people forever” ; when the past is presented from a
perspective that aims to justify either one of these points of
view, it creates “a distorted picture that cannot do justice to
the actual record of events” . |
“The possible sources are endless, for human
creativity knows no bounds” and the director, akin to the
historian, has to undertake a process of selection- that will
unavoidably lead to the omission of certain aspects- according
to the judgment of an individual who I generally regard, from
the evidence, as first an artist and then a historian. The
historian, however, is less concerned with his literary
abilities than the more important “scrutiny of his historical
scholarship”... |
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Veronika Melasova
Slovak resistance in WWII
An oral history case study |
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Julia Schvarcova
The Velvet Revolution 1989
A Czech and Slovak comparative study. |
Intrigued by my family’s history in the Second
World War, I became interested in the Slovak resistance against
Nazis. This investigation evaluates the value of the oral
history using case study interviews with my father grandmother
and about my grandparent’s involvement in the underground
activities.
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As T.G. Ash notes: “[But] if a land has to have a
revolution, then it would be difficult to imagine a better
revolution than the one Czechoslovakia had: swift, almost
entirely non-violent, joyful and funny” ; describing the
revolution on both sides of Czechoslovakia. Although there are
differences to be found, as to what was their motivating factor
in the resistance against the regime and how they were led,
these minor differences did not divide the nation. |
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Lucia Suhányiová
“Heavy Water: A Film for Chernobyl”
Film makers and history |
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Isha Chauhan
Mao 1945-49
How important was military strategy? |
'I was first told about the Chernobyl accident by
my father, who had at that time studied at a university in Kiev.
The little information I got from the conversation with him
sparked my interest and therefore, Chernobyl seemed like a good
topic for my Internal Assessment since it is one of the most
memorable man-made disasters and its effects are still present
and have a great influence on people.' |
Mao Zedong’s accession to power on October 1,
1949, was a moment of victory for the once insignificant Chinese
Communist Party which overcame the Nationalists, who had
attained power after the collapse of the Qing Dynasty in 1911.
This IA will examine the extent to which Mao’s successful
military tactics were significant in his coming to power. |
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Zhenia
Plotnikova *
Lies My Teacher Told Me
Objectivity in School History Textbooks
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Simone
Scully
Kent State
A turning point in the Vietnam War? |
'[Through]...frequent
use of personal pronouns “we” and “our”, American
textbooks “indoctrinate blind patriotism: “Take a look in
your history book, and you'll see why we should be proud”.
Textbooks’ aim to sanitise history as “reliable, practical
knowledge [enhancing] moral standards that…accelerate the
acquisition of knowledge”, deprives students of objectivity
all for developing universal moral attitudes.' |
'Kent State became symbolic of “the deep political
and social divisions that … divided the country during the
Vietnam War era”, highlighting at home the horrors of war. The
shootings made war blatantly public and incited massive student
strikes. Although strikes may not have forced Washington to change
its policies, they had an influence on the American people. '
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Alex
Newton
What were the causes of the Boston Massacre 1776?
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Hannah
Thompson *
How imaginative should historians be?
A case study of “The Return of Martin Guerre”
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'Though
to be forever branded a “massacre”, the events of the fifth
of March were, in truth, somewhat less dramatic. In the end,
whether the “massacre” was planned or not (by either side),
the confusion, the fear, the danger of the night make it hard to
place blame unequivocally. In reality, we cannot say who was “guilty”
because, when a mob clashes with armed men, there will be
casualties, regardless of intent.' |
'If Davis had not applied knowledge of
sixteenth-century French peasant women to the evidence about
Bertrande’s behaviour, it would be fairly useless. Creative
empathy helps us acquire a good approximation of what Bertrande
may have been thinking... This ‘approximation’ of her feelings
is better than nothing: the conclusion that the simple facts would
have given.'
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Emma
Wilcock
The role of women living in post-war Britain.
Family/oral history
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Mimi
Kirby *
Orwell's Road to Wigan Pier
The use of literature to the historian
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'Directly
after the war, women’s lives and roles within society and
especially the perception that society had of women, changed.
But this perception was easily reverted back to what it had
always been: women at home and men earning. The 60’s brought a
liberation for women, through contraception, divorce acts, music
and fashion but whether this can be said to be directly linked
with the war is a question...' |
'The use of facts and the use of stylistic writing
are not necessarily mutually exclusive. In writing convincing
history, a gift for language and story-telling is usually required
– art and history are intertwined and always have been. The
influence of the author is inescapable in any account being told:
indeed, if we follow the thrust of post-modern analysis then there
is very little difference between history and literature'
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Grace
Brodie
Miners’ Strike of 1984:
How did the Tories defeat the miners?
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Ed
Ritchie
How useful are documentaries to historians. Marcel Ophuls’ ‘Le
Chagrin Et La Pitié’.
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‘Regardless
of the admirable unity and solidarity of the miners they were
defeated by the Conservatives. How Thatcher managed to emerge
victorious following the eleven-month bitter struggle can be
looked upon as the result of four key factors; the aims of the
government under her leadership, the unruly tactics of Scargill,
the Tory preparation preceding the strike and the climate of
political opinion in 1980’s Britain. |
In recent years documentary films such as ‘Fahrenheit
911’ and ‘The Fog Of War’ have cultured thousands of people...
by using the case study of Marcel Ophuls’ iconoclastic
documentary film The Sorrow and The Pity, which depicts how the
people of France really conducted themselves under the
extraordinary circumstances of Nazi rule, can we assess whether
documentary films are valuable to historians.
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Helena
Tejedor
Spanish Civil War refugee children in the USSR
A case study of Manuel Arce
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John
Coleman
Sergei Eisenstein’s account of 1905 Russian revolution
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'The
Spanish children that lived in those homes were the first people
to be evacuated in Russia1most of them were evacuated to Siberia
where, during the 38 days the train journey lasted, many died of
hunger and cold. When they reached Sanmarkanda, they started to
work in cotton fields or tank factories and they ate the cats in
the area due to their hunger... Most of them are very thankful
to Stalin.' |
During the 1920’s Great Russian filmmakers worked
under the context of socialist realism and strived to create films
that told the truth, or a truth. Filmmakers like Vertov used a
technique called ‘cinema truth’, employing a hidden camera to
capture the ‘truth’... Eisenstein used a technique called ‘montage’,
making a third image ‘in the minds of the audiences’
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Robin
Webb *
The German Occupation
of the Channel Islands:
July
1940 – May 1945
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Graeme
Vance
Why did the Special Operations Executive send aid to Tito’s
communist Partisans?
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'Independent
Televisionaired the program “Island at War” in July 2004,
depicting the Channel Islanders as “[laying] on their backs
and [making] moaning noises" as the Germans invaded. From
this emerged my question – to what extent did the Islanders
collaborate with the Germans? My investigation was also
personal, as my father is from the Island of Jersey... |
It
is possible to come to the conclusion that without the aid of
the SOE, the partisans may not have survived the war. With the
Germans becoming closer to destroying them as a fighting force,
the bounty upon Tito’s head and the betrayal of the Chetniks,
the partisans could have been broken anytime between 1942-45.
The SOE managed to switch allegiances just in time... |
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Justine
King
Literature and History:
Doris Lessing, a case
study in the usefulness of literature to historians.
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Katie
Greer
How far were Republican divisions responsible for
their loss in the Spanish Civil War? |
'Hayden
White argues that "an historical text is in essence nothing
more than a literary text, a poetical creation as deeply
involved in the imagination as the novel"....Literature enables
historians to get inside the characters and understand and feel
what it was like living through that time –
it brings history to life. |
'...are the historical filmmaker and the
traditional, academic historian really very dissimilar? Both
impose structure and meaning on ‘the past,’ in such a way that
their views of it can be understood by others...the wish to show
the past ‘as it happened,’ is a naïve form of history: since
‘the past’ is not a narrative, but a vast ‘foreign
country’, it would be impossible to ‘accurately’ recreate,
‘as it happened'.
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Julien
Bell
Was the Resistance French?
A case study of Toulouse 1940-1944
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Russell
Gay
The B-59 Submarine Incident:
A
case study of the importance of declassified documentation |
'However
much one wants to argue over reasons of blood, nationality or
motivation, whoever, is ready to run the risk of a hideous death
to fight for a country that is not their own should be honored.
Thus, I will conclude this essay by saying that it does not
matter whether they were French or not, all that mattered was
that they fought for a righteous cause.' |
'The
worldwide-web access provided by the Internet means that archives
from most countries around the world can be accessed from anywhere
by anyone. An amateur historian such as myself could not have
undertaken research on this scale ten years ago...This research is
possible solely due to declassification of documents by all the
governments involved in this incident. '
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Chiara Carnevale
Nostalgia: A
case study exploring nostalgia in Italy and the portrayal
of Benito Mussolini
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Susannah
Leahy
Cinema as History
Sir Richard Attenborough's Gandhi (website) |
'...nostalgia
is a feeling of longing for something, whether concrete or
abstract, that reminds us of a time in our lives when we were
happiest. Although the reality of the circumstances of those
days may not be as blissful as we may recall, nostalgia gives us
the power to eliminate the negative...as
for people like my grandmother, it is almost impossible for them
to escape nostalgia.' |
'Creating
a flowing narration requires the acceptance and proliferation of
certain events and thoughts that would never on their own be
accepted as fact... film, as a visual and empathic version of
events, can be much closer to the truth of the past than pure
“history”. To see figures of the past... to smell, hear,
breathe India alongside him, is something beyond the creative
capacity of the greatest academic historian.' |
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Sophie
Ledger
Analysis of the strengths and weaknesses of oral
history: Evelyn Haddrell (Grandmother)
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Marie
Behrens
Was Hitler's 'euthanasia' policy distinctively Nazi? |
'Through
interviewing Evelyn Haddrell, I was able to open up the past and
join her in her youth. To be in the presence of the past, the
value is direct, one relives the past with the interviewee and
shares their experiences. This value is perhaps
non-quantifiable, as the value is human and based on personal
feelings and a connection between human beings, which cannot be
substituted or replicated...' |
'Euthanasia
was first brought up in the 1850’s, the German government had
already thought about killing those that were mentally and
physically ill, but they never put this into action.It later came up in 1920 when Professor of psychiatry
Alfred Hoch M.D. at the university of Freiburg and Karl Binding
a Professor of law in the university of Leipzig wrote the
book Die Freigabe der Vernichtung lebenunwerten Lebens.' |
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Helen Coleman *
Who were the
Greenham Common Peace Protesters? |
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Kathryn
Goodall *
'Twisted Myths'
Cathars: History vs. Heritage |
'By researching and comparing descriptions of the women who
in 1981, made ‘world history’ by continuing their local
tradition of peaceful protest against the Greenham USAF base, I
aim to discover whom the Peace Protesters outside Greenham
Common near Newbury, Berkshire, England, really were.' |
'A central difference between history and
heritage is that history seeks to explore and explain whereas
heritage clarifies from a present perspective...This research
grew from my awareness of local heritage. I had seen ‘brown
road signs’ promoting the “Cathar Country” and had visited
Montségur on several occasions but before research, I was
unable to fully appreciate historical fact and Cathar Heritage.' |
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Nic
Hollingdale
Triumph of the
Will
Art, propaganda or documentary? |
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Erik
Rademaker
The historical utility of photography:
A case study of Vietnam |
'Triumph
of the Will consists of many powerful and lasting images
created from selection and editing and these scenes created an
emotional
response from the audience. Due to the distortion of reality by
these shots and their role in the formation of opinion the film
can be interpreted to be one of propaganda.' |
Still images have a far greater
impact on people because they can study one moment in time for
length of time... The look on the Viet Cong prisoner’s
face and the smoky background create an atmosphere of fear.
Although moving images and photography serve as significant
historical sources, photography has a more powerful effect. |